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Involution I

my legs my hands my spine
   pouring out leaf patterns
   from a center--
   dammitilostitagain
   today, or
   shitwheredidileaveitnow

again

and going out!:
   complex colonies—
   speech Between Us,
   pooling like urine:
   awkwardly.

   stagnant temples
   and the people who live there--

but Between Us there is only an ocean,
   the depth of meaning
   the depth of fuck ups
   and the closeness of being
   together
   co-existence

   two lambs
   sleeping on the knife
   two lambs
   waiting on the unknown.

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Written February 8th, 2005

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  • The Chameleon
    February 18, 2005
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    Excellent beyond recognition

    Your poem was amazing. What does involution mean? I love how you were able to capture the moment so well. I give loads of props my friend loads. Keep kicking some ass.