You hurt me, I hate you,
You said you love me you discussed me,
You made me cry I can't dry my eye.
I wish you was dead, I need you out my head,
You give me fear when you are near,
You made my life so shit and dull,
The bruise you gave me, the marks still show,
Not on the outside but on the in.
Now i have someone to love,
His love is strong he'll do me no wrong,
You did me wrong,
Wrong you're see I'll get you back for hurting me!.
It makes me sad to hear the words you said,
The words you said upon the bed:
'You're my princess'.
You scare me now, You scared me then,
Now i wish my life would end.
And i still quake from that word:Rape.
Author notes
This is just my way of letting my emoshions out for this is a true poem.
Written February 8th, 2005
A contest entry
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Very brave to write something with such emotions and truth. The rhyme was a little dull but that doesnt take away from the meaning. Im not sure where this would relate to with the topics given... Good luck though and tahnk you for entering.
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Maybe more emotions in this poem... But I like that last line perhaps you should add a line in seems something is missing yet nice...
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i like this very much. thanks for sharing and i hope to read mre from you soon. maybe after the contest thanks a lot for sharing. well written and wonderfully done
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Hiya hunni,
Thanxz for the comment,
look at my 2 now 1'z n the now 1 about Aaron it is called:
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I AM SURE I COMMENTED ON THIS BUT IF NOT IT IS REALLY GD LUV YA LOADS SARAH XX X X X X X X XX
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Hiya thanxz for this amazing comment I think it was so moving I have never hade a comment that made me wonna cry b4
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So sad,this poem give's me chill's,I really feel for you,and I hope one day you can dry your tear's and place the uglyness way out of your thought's.wow girl I hope you only have good in your life from now on,after all you have already see the most ugly side of what life has to offer,so from now on it's got to be good for you this is what I wish for you,God bless you and your's
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Hiya Thanks for your comment,
This poem means a lot to me as you can probaly tell,
Thanks once again,
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This is a really good poem, alot of emotion.
"You hurt me, I hate you,
You said you love me you discussed me,
You made me cry I can't dry my eye.
I wish you was dead, I need you out my head,"
These opening lines are reallly good.
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Thanks yes it does help to write about it and it is even better to hear that people injoy to read my poems so thanks for the comment
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very dark and sad. sorry to hear about this. hope it helps to write about. you did a good job with expressing yourself.
Blu
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