As He Held Her Down
She Tried To Fight
He Grabbed Her Wrists
And Held Her Tight
"You Will Like It"
He Lectured Her
"You Will Love It
Because You Love Me"
She Pleaded And Begged
As He Came Close
He Took Off Her Shirt
To See The Most
He Unclasped Her Bra
As She Fought So Hard
Ripped Off Her Pants
And Spread Her Legs Apart
"It's Okay"
He Told Her Again
She Didn't Scream
As He Forced His Way In
His Family Was Upstairs
It Was Christmas Time
They Called For Them
For A Glass Of Wine
A Hope Rose In Her
As She Heard Their Voice
He Ended That
She Had No Choice
She Waited For Him To Finish
Got Dressed And Went Home
A Couple Weeks Later
She Started To Show
She Woke One Night
To Blood All Around
She Went To The Doctors
She Felt She Had Drown
Her Love Of Her Life
Killed Her Inside
And The Baby He Forced
Was Also To Die
She Didn't Even Know
That She Was Expecting
But When Her Little Baby Died
Her Life Started Ending
That Day She Went Home
With Her Prescription Pills
Took Them All In One Shot
In Time She Was Still
Her Family Never Knew
What He Did To Her
He Never Got The Punishment
They Felt He Deserved
For He Killed A Girl
A Mother A Child
A Sister A Daughter
With A Punishment So Mild
So As She Rests
He Rots In His Cell
And When He's Done That
He Will Rot In Hell
Author notes
Written February 8th, 2005
A contest entry
- A Little This... A Little That by pimp daddy satin.
341 points, ended December 30, 2006, 72 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Its always Rainin' in my Head by A.N. Divine.
450 points, ended January 23, 2007, 13 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Thats Heavy
It's truly a heavy thing, rape.
I really admire your willingness to write about it.
"I'm SIkc but I'm Pretty"-Alanis Morissette said that, and I think these sort of writes really define that.
Good job.
-C.
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WOW!!!!!!!
oh this a a wonderful poem!!!! I am speachless!! most people just write a poem about getting raped and then a seperate one about losing someone. but not you! you made a whole story flow together into one great poem!!! you did a fabulous job on this. although it is sad it inspires me!! keep it up!! your work is unbelievable -
a girl can be pregnant.... starting to show.... and all that and not know that she is having a baby
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im sorry i didnt mean to actually hit people with their past experiences
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OMG!!!! awesomeness! I hope this isnt true, its amazing!!! rhymes so well! and amazing!!!! don't know what else to say!!!! brilliant write!!! fab, fab, fab!!!
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The storyline of this poem was not consitant it went back and forth with parts that dont really go together such as
"A Couple Weeks Later
She Started To Show"
Then you said-
"She Didn't Even Know
That She Was Expecting"
There are a few others but other than that this was a good write!
Edited on Mar 07, 2:28 p.m. because 'uuuuuhhhhh.........'. -
GREAT--I've went through that so I cried!
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So emotional and scarcley true. I hope this wasn't about you. Please keep writing because this was a wonderful poem and I liked it very much!
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This is an awesome poem, sad but nonetheless awesome! I love it! Keep up the great writing! Please check out some of my poetry if you get a chance and tell me what you think!
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great
yeh. i like how youy rhymed some stuff and didnt rhyme other lines. great write, however, i really enjoyed this. -
freaky writing. its incredibly vivid.
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A deeply emotional write, spoken with the wisdom of someone who has at least been close to such a situation, if not directly affected by it.
Much love to you! -
no i dont mind if its not true because it sounds real enough to me, we must think alike becasue i have written about stuff that hasnt happened to me, hehe good luck, keep writing
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wow. im in awe, im ttouched, this is so emotional, i hope this isnt about you because no-one deserves this. beautiful write, im speechless. amazing write, good luck in the contest, thanks for entering
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