A forbidden love so divine
The sacred cries of rapturous pleasure
As she caresses me with her lips
Taking me solely for herself
In the pleasure of the falling rain
My body ripples with unspoken bliss
Something I've longed to feel inside
The warmth of her soft body against mine
To be able to touch her so sensually
And have her touch me in return
In my place of fantasy
Out in the rain, caressing our bodies
Driving us to a higher level of desire
Touch so soft, kisses so hungry
Expelling all of the longing I hold within
Hearing your soft cries, feeling your body arch
As I slowly caress your inner lips with my tongue
While I massage your soft mounds so gently
Taking in every bit of your passion and releasing mine
Releasing it right into your lovely moist warmth
Tasting you so greedily, leaving no more for anyone
Taking you all for my own, as you had me
Hearing your moans and, 'Please fuck me!'
Turning me on, making me hotter; desiring you even more
As I continue to give you all I have
And when we are both out of breath
We lie on the grass, holding one another close
As the rain continues to caress our bodies in the darkness
Where our secret union had taken place
And we fall asleep satisfied and breathless
For our kisses of desire leave us no time to breathe...
Author notes
I am bisexual, like the title says.
Written February 7th, 2005
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Fantastic imagery and a wonderful build up to a climatic ending, the rain theme i feel really added to this also and made my imagination come to life. Great write !
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WOW! This is hot. Damn. I love the background that goes with it. Very well written filled with lots of imagery. Thank you foe sharing.. ~~Shannon~~
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this really got too me in so many levels i will be back to read more one of my favs
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... ... Will you be my AP wife???
You just... ach... wow... I can't even put into words how much I have enjoyed these pieces of yours. Your word choice... is so perfect and sensual. And the flow was flawless. 
Keep it up.
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And to think, I wrote these while I was still a teenager. Never actually been with a girl before, if you can believe that.
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I really really can't!
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I have a good imagination.
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Okay that was hot, damn. And to relate this to personal experience - making love in the rain is romantic and sensual - You have some amazing imagery here, very erotic and sexy without being sleazy....not that I don't like sleasy of course. But this is soothing and emotional which is beautiful.
And you've seriously got me smitten, my dear. I adore all the things you write.
If you need this fantasy worked out you know where to find me. Haha. Oh and I did read your author page earlier and I'm glad you are happy and lucky in love. 
~Alexis
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I can live without the fantasy as long as I c
I know what you mean. My verdict says it all. "If I can write about it I'm satisfied." I feel the same way. I am not straight/lesbian/bisexual, I suppose you can say. I just believe if I'm in love then that's all that matters. No matter the occupation/gender. Reading this poem just sets me in the mood and reminds me of the times I shared moments with a girl. The touch you can only get from a girl. Girls just know what you want because they sometimes themselves want it in return. I'm sorry, I'm rambling along.
A forbidden love so divine
The sacred cries of rapturous pleasure
As she caresses me with her lips
Taking me solely for herself
In the pleasure of the falling rain
My body ripples with unspoken bliss
Something I've longed to feel inside
The warmth of her soft body against mine
To be able to touch her so sensually
And have her touch me in return
In my place of fantasy
Out in the rain, caressing our bodies
Driving us to a higher level of desire
Touch so soft, kisses so hungry
Expelling all of the longing I hold within
I'm sorry. I just couldn't pick one stanza. This reminds me of great memories. The way you described it made me feel like I was there again. I too am with someone I love. My poetry is where it may or may not stay. The desire to be with someone that is against my religion and so on and so forth. Forbidden Love.
Edited on Jun 05 because 'My verdict didn't show completely.'. -
Perhaps one day, but who really knows? I'm currently with the love of my life, and I can live without the fantasy as long as I can write about it.
Thank you for your comment. 
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You have written another great poem. I hope that you get to experience your fantasy. I enjoyed this work very much and look forward to more of your writings..
*Ktulu Blackwolfe* -
Thank you for your comment. Good luck with judging.
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mmmm....making love in the rain. also a fantasy of mine that i havn't yet been able to fulfill
oh well. great write and thanks for entering the contest.
Hidden Angel
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Thank you. I'm glad you enjoyed this.
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lucky boyfriend
this had all my attention from start to finnish....very sexy.... -
Thank you.
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I fucking love this! It's soo awesome! you have an amazing talent!
Love
Brandy -
Glad you enjoyed the poem.
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Yum!
Wow! This really is HOT! A very turning on poem. Very sensual and well penned. I didn't like the background. Otherwise, I really enjoyed the intensity of this poem. Goodluck in the contest!
Charishma -
Well, Natsumi didn't exactly say it had to be dark and judgiing from their comment, I do believe they didn't have a problem with my entry. Thank you for your comment.
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It's sensual, but I honestly don't see the dark or the erotic.
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Goddess? I didn't know I was a Goddess! Thanks though!
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oh, i have one too. but girls are great can't help that. your poem was fantastic goddess. xo
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Ah, thanks dear but I have a boyfriend at the moment. I'll keep it in mind though!
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WOW! consider em seduced. I'm bi too. so whenever you want this fantasy realized *winks. hehehe. i loved it and now i need a moment...
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Glad you enjoyed.
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i fucking love this
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This isn't a true experience I've been in..Just a fantasy. Glad you enjoyed it though. Thank you for taking the time to comment.
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Is this your actual feelings, or just a great poem that popped up in your head, the work is wonderful, I think I will tell my friends to read it. . .
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My characters aren't just based on myself beacause truthfully, Talia is nothing like me. Rose is my persona and she bisexual as well. Lol. Anyway, thank you for commenting.
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I think I see now where you may have come up with Talia, it makes a little more sense now. But its all good in my book, later!
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Thank you for your comment. I'm glad you enjoyed reading.
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Great job!! I am bisexual, also. I love your poem....good luck in the contest!
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Woah! You got me smitten Loved the imagery, loved it all. Now you got me curious. Overall, very good!
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I know that I have something wonderful and I'm not willing to give it up for an experience that could ruin everything I have. I'm not that much of a risk taker...However, at the same time, I still wonder what it'd be like...Thank you for commenting.
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Nicely written...Mixed emotions are understandable and 'never say never' dear...Life is full of twists and turns...Don't dwell on it and just see where life takes you...You have someone special that loves you and that isn't something to take lightly...His words are wise.
Tory Lin -
I love you. I enjoy this. I want you to be true to yourself, don't hold yourself back. However, it does require extensive thought.
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As for poem, it's wonderful. A fantasy well-written. I really like the imagry and would enjoy seeing something similar to this somehow... most likely in a story or something. -
I'm not even sure if I really want it to happen...I just want to experience it....but yeah...I have so many mixed emotions about this...
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You never know whether you will or not. I love you hunny. Keep your chin up
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