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Disjointed thoughts

Bored bored bored, I so hate to be bored.
First its quite, lost in my head.
Then very quickly joy turns to dread.
Being alone with the thoughts in my head.

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Written February 7th, 2005

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  • Scarlett silver member
    July 15, 2005
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    Darling ~

    When we're finally together without all of these petty disruptions, you'll never have to be bored again.

    Love you,

    -30-