Under the seventh sign of the zodiac
where the sun enters the autumn equinox
was cast a union of love
bound in an existence everlasting
built upon a towering edifice,
the planets perpetually aligned within;
home to an irrefutable attraction
binding emotions sheltering
where their sustained devotions dwell;
Such a dwelling, to withstand time itself,
twelve houses combined in all;
the paths of two interacting lives
set in stained-glass scenes
framed in the cusp of the twelve zodiac houses
fashioned to catch such things;
reflections, hued affection of collected light,
pieces of ascending thought
permeating psyches...
It is two who will exist together forever
under the heavens,
as the planets mingle their energies
with fragments of their zodiac love.
Author notes
someday I'm going to inject some feeling into this poem...!
Written February 7th, 2005
did, a little... May 16th, 2009
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Actually, i think this piece should have gone under the sign of astrology rather than astronomy. This was a great piece that already had a lot of feeling in it which i could feel. I love your background and how you set the piece out. I was sitting here trying to figure out which sign was the seventh. A great little piece.
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yes, you are absolutely right... what was I thinking? Maybe the planets and stars and whatnot... the seventh sign... like you, I'd have to google it again...!
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I really liked this one, I love the tale and myths of the Zodiac. In 2026 I think we inter the age of Aquarius and that is me.....just interesting stuff. Well done.
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Interesting, wbiro...to start to base a list on astrology...i dont know too too much about astrology...for what is the seventh sign? I am a Leo by sun, and a Taurus by moon what does this say??? Bek I am applauding taking on theme such as this...for i find it daunting...
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Blessings taken!
thief!
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First and formost I must compliment you on a spectacular background. It's simply stunning! As for this write it is awe inspiring. You have taken a subject not many would and created a beautiful and lovely work of art. You have a true talent for beauty and poetic writing.
I consider it a pleasure and an honor to read such a talent as yours.
Blessings
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Masterful-write
A beautiful alluring write.Hauntingly romantic and perpetualy devotional. It speaks of star-crossed true soul blending.If you two have infact,found each other.Maybe hope springs eternal for us all....Talented Write...Suseann -
Interesting you should choose Libra -- one of the latest signs to be added to the Zodiac spectrum (In recent Roman times....yes, there is no end to the trivia I can summon with a mere click of a switch).
You've delved into the ancient lore to prop this piece up -- and it's hopeful (as most forcasts are). Like the artwork.
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