Your warm breath caresses my ear as you whisper so sweet
Taking my breath away and sweeping me right off of my feet
Your whispers of love and longing tempting to let you in
But what is the main prize you are trying so hard to win
Is it undying love and faithfulness that you want to share
Or is this all just a momentary need to have someone there
Do you want to be there for the rest of my now lonely life
Maybe even someday to take me away and make me your wife
Or am I just a temporary fix so you don't have to be alone
When you hold me in your arms do you feel you have found home
You look into My eyes and you have love there inside of yours
And I long to believe you will help me to open life's doors
I dream of us together forever always walking hand and hand
That for eternity you will be there by my side you will stand
I want to say those words that are on the tip of my tongue
But what if I do and it scares you then you turn around and run
My mind always wanders wondering about all the what ifs
And it stops me from saying that you are the one I am with
Please my love be patient and keep sweeping me off my feet
Keep whispering words of love and giving kisses so sweet
Give us both the time to see it is finally one that's real
That we can both be sure of all that we think that we feel
These doubts are only natural as or past is so full of pain
And only time will tell if we will both be hurt once again
So let's just have patience and let us evolve steady and slow
And all the joys of heaven will be what we finally know
We have all the time in the world if we are truly meant to be
And if we are not it will be easier to set each other free
Author notes
Written February 7th, 2005
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Thank you Natari your comments are always a joy Niki
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Excellent
Excellent Niki you have again captued so much emotion in your work.It reaches out and touches the reader.Bravo
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It's always such a pleasure to read your writes as they always flow so well and from your heart. Keep up the awesome work!!!
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thank you Mythtress I am glad you enjoyed it niki
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Thank you drummer I try to Just write what I feel so I guess i am a natural
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Thanks for reading Lost Dom I am glad you liked it
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Thank you Rush Much appreciated Niki
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This is sweet and seems very heartfelt. Beautiful write. Smiles. Write on, poet.
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Ahh my computer is stupid. And yeah, this is the third comment on this. Sorry anyway I thought your words really flowed onto the paper you sound like a natural at this stuff! Wonderful job!
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Sorry I ended that early. Very cool background and font, fits right along in with the whole theme of the poem. Nice choices of words, they really fit in your poem.
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Wow great job I enjoyed every minute of reading this poem. AWESOME AWESOME AWESOME!
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this was wonderful. I enjoyed it very much. I thought it was very detailed and emotional. I really like it. You should enter it in a contest...it has a very good chance of winning some points. Awesome job.
Cheers!
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not bad, very sweet and heart felt, best of wishes ~Rush
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