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Suicide Emotions

Empty Bottle.
Bloody Razor.
Sleeping Girl.
Bloody Faker.

Crying Phone.
Screaming Siren.
Worried Friends.
Screaming Dyin'.

New Attention.
Pain Attoned.
Feigned Concern.
Pain Moaned.

Flying Rumors.
Truth Untold.
Red Wrappings.
Truth Cold.

False Emotions.
Nasty Smile.
Mending Scars.
Nasty Bile.

Rotten Actress.
Horrible Liar.
Imminent Scorn.
Horrible Fire.

Author notes

A girl that I have known for a long time tried to kill herself three days ago. She was worried about it getting out at school and didn't want anybody to know but, when she got to school today she went up to every person that she knew (even if she only knew their name) and showed them her scars and was all smiles. I felt sorry for her at first but, when she started doing that I just got mad. She is nothing but a needy poser and I almost wish she had died.
Written February 7th, 2005

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  • Sir Shay
    April 23, 2005
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    ♥

    This makes me think of a girl I know who has tried suicide for attention before. This is just so true.

    ♥ ~Stormy~ ♥

  • ApatheticEmotions
    February 7, 2005
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    Super Sweet!!!

    OMG..This poem dictates her so well Joy. Keep up the good work..and you may use my poetry to gain whatever it is you needed. Do a contest on Adult/Erotica...But make it to where it is about actual sensual love between two people not just stuff for people to get off on...so I'm gonna try to write more but I have no clue what to right.