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Gone

Your gone
For real this time
No matter what I say

Years will come
without you here
fear will set in

Young hopes will diminish
dilute in my heart
Forever will be erased

Youthful love
to last then fall
but still exist

Yet i still foolishly hope
for you may come back
but once again

Author notes

i wrote this a long time ago, when i had to leave my love, i still think about him, and his eyes
Written November 7th, 2003

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  • secret fountain
    July 11, 2005
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    i think this poem is cute. i like it. you did a really good job with it. i like it was better than the other one i read. sorry. keep up the good writes.