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The Man Of the Hour

Her head is under
Hair strewn about her
It’s all about the lover
The man of the hour
Place kisses on her
Smothering her
He only wants to love her
Flight was all she wanted
He pulled her under
The man of the hour
He hides her persona
Stands over her
Her light grows dimmer
Under the water
The life slips from her
Because of the lover
It’s all about the lover
The man of the hour…
The man of the hour…

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Written February 6th, 2005

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  • Push1t
    February 7, 2005
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    I love it.
    ~lyds