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La Bella Muerte

With dead eyes
You see her glow
An angel you’ve never known
In the darkness your life slips away
You reach for a hand that has long been decayed
The sky is black
And the winds have changed
You’ll love no one
Until your dying day  

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iono
Written February 6th, 2005

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  • AMoonOnMyWings
    February 6, 2005
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    It's an oriental house. Love the poetry
    ~MOONZ