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Love...

Life's
      Obsolete
   Vindicated
                          Expressions.
      Left Of Valhalla's Evanescent
                   Lessons
                            Of
            Vicious
                                    Enigma.

Author notes

Jumble a Big jumble
Written February 6th, 2005

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  • LonelyDepressed
    March 15, 2005
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    oOo i liked the formish.. very nice

    chrissy


  • Parearoo
    February 7, 2005
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    Excellent job, mike!!!

  • trublu
    February 6, 2005
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    nice acrostics. maybe you could turn this into shape poetry. good effort!