In your age of innocence, I adore you beyond reason....
Your smile royal, Your demeanor commanding,
And, Oh, how I seek you out!
Shimmering pools of aquatic blue...
Drowning in lust , I can hardly breathe
My distraction is your aura , your presence of Being.
The sensual fullness of your mouth
I want to capture your tongue with mine.
This insatiable need to taste your lips ,Consumes my very soul
I am a prisoner , existing only for your embrace,
raging as a tempest against your shore.
Speak my name, for I know nothing else that gives me divine intoxication
The sound of your voice makes me hunger for a more ancient song
Speak to me...Speak to me.....You're the one I adore.
AlanaDevon2005
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Written February 6th, 2005
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The depth of passion and despair is tragic and beautiful! You feel from the heart and you are able to allow us to feel those emotions. Keep writing and growing.
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Oh, My, my first contest Win...Thank You ,Raneika...This poem is very special too me..His name is Michael...Beyond Reason, and so very unattainable...tragic but it makes for good writing.
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Excellent Write Very good piece so well-written two thumbs up great write and thanks for entering my contest much love Raneika
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Kimberly ...I remember your comments and once again Thank you...How disappointing this is...never having my work critiqued it was wonderful to have all the delightful comments that allpoetry members took the time to say about my work and the poems of others on this site...I do understand but saddened.
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Beautifully done. I really like this. You did a wonderfully job writing your thoughts down. I hope you do well in the contest. Have a fun and safe Valentines Day
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AlanaDevon;
Due to a most unfortunate system crash, many of the comments for the past six days have been deleted from the system and cannot be retrieved. For my own personal reference, I want to once again make note that I did read and comment on this poem at some earlier time and once again thank you for taking the time to enter the Greeter's contest. I also continue to encourage you to become more familiar with our wonderful site.
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Thank You, your words are so appreciated and so very kind. I am still trying to learn the site.Thank you for reminding me...
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oh, goodness. This was very descriptive and approached the theme so nicely! Language art was a plus..and appropriately used.Unique.
Thank you for sharing and don't forget to comment on someone else's work and place it in the author's comment area as the contest asks.
Good work. Warmly, CookieZeal
Edited on Feb 07, 10:54 p.m. because ''.
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