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We are Just an Experiment

What if, I were to tell you...A secret no-one knew
What if I were to tell you...Out of everything you do,
There was no reason, There will be no reason,
There was never a reason, true.

What if my secret was there is no reason for anything.
None for dying, none for living every day.
None for listening, None for hearing anything you had to say.
No reason, like a whisper in the back of your mind, you'd know...
There was no essential reason for you to live today or tommorow...
Or dare i dream, not even a care of a reason for your sorrow.
Those pains throughout your life (to make you suffer)
No reason for people at War Hunger or in Strife.
No god given reason for anything at all...

Would you still live your life...?
Or with this little secret, of no reason...
From ashes to ashes, fall ?

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A question that burning question...
Written February 5th, 2005

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  • March 26, 2005
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    very nice poem. Great flow. Awesome overall story...Took the words right out of my mind.

  • LonelyDepressed
    March 15, 2005
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    heh psh i'd be happier if there was no reason for everything. then i'd know i can do what i really want. lol.. sorry.
    but i loved the poem with the depths of my heart.
    you're an awesome poet.

    chrissy

  • SamBam76
    February 7, 2005
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    The more i read of your writtings the more i want to kiss you! (haha)you are very talented writter!!


  • Corpse-Groom
    February 6, 2005
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    Hmmmm thats the point...If we base our life upon this and its a fallacy that we eventually figure out...we all *or most* would crumble...or Would we...?


  • countrybabe gold member
    February 6, 2005
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    wow...I loved the flow and the thought that went into this piece. Believe me if everyone thought there was no reason to life, do you really think that mankind would exist today? lol. Just a simple question and opinion.

    Well done

    Keep writing

    Countrybabe

  • HitchHiker
    February 6, 2005
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    sounds like a dark nightmare of sorts...and I mean that as a compliment. It has a sound of...searching for something - of holding on to something...good job.

  • IHeartFatBoyz
    February 6, 2005
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    I had to think about this... lol somethign I don't USUALY do but very good hun. I dont know what else to say really. I like it though.

  • Corpse-Groom
    February 5, 2005
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    Ahhh but u dont actually know if there is indeed...how can you (we) be certain... *I believe it as well...I have to i have no choice otherwise i'd go mad.. *


  • HaleyMary
    February 5, 2005
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    applause

    Nice poem. It makes me think of if we only had one life to live it would seem like there would be no point in living. I don't think that's true though because then it would take all meaning out of life.

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