Undiluted lies.... awash with tears
of torment...wreaking havoc
with the inner peace......platitudes
offered...undisguised..apparent..
thoughtlessly flung to appease
the hungry appetite of hope...
illusions of security.. veil the
knowledge...of inevitability...
Loneliness rears it's ugly head.............
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Written February 5th, 2005
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Loneliness is many things. Do you know it is still today the number one killer of all time. How could something so insignificant be so powerful? Well, anything that influences our emotions so strongly is definitely a powerful force.
Great write.
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This is a beautiful write full of melancholy feelings. Very good word choice and emotion put into it. Enjoyed. Take care and Have fun. Steve
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this is different than what i've heard on this site. espicially because of the way it was written or typed or w/e. i mean the parts with the dots. the use of words also makes it stick out a little. the part that says "of invitability...loniness rears it's ugly head.........." th most. i don't kno y though. but o wel. good job.
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Ohhh this is effing beautiful. I love it. Especially the ending. And those eyes are such a pretty picture thingy. *gives yew a cookie and a clappy thing* Rockin' write man! I effing love love love it.
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Thank you my friend
Glad you enjoyed the last line.....
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wow. i loved the last line, Loneliness rears it's ugly head. that was a really good line. this was a nice poem, sad and yet beautiful. nice combination in a poem, great write. take care
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