My life was changed
my world became
a disaster
I couldn't breathe
I couldn't talk
I couldn't even think
Each breath was a task
Each word was a hardship
Each thought was a burden
I guess what I'm trying to say is
I really missed you...
my dear Hershey's
when I had to give you up
Author notes
Written February 5th, 2005
A contest entry
- Love, Laughter and your VERY best!!! by aussiechic4444.
300 points, ended February 6, 2005, 14 entries
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Comments
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Haha! I thought it was a person! But hersheys just might be harder to live without!
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This is very interesting... well done.
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this is a good piece. it's short, but still effective in getting the point and emotion across. i really loved the last three lines - a lot. nicely done! keep up the good work, and best of luck in the contest <33
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