Why do i submit myself to this torture?
I try to talk, she closes her ears
I try to hug, she runs away
She says she likes me,
Yet she rolls her eyes when I say the same
What is wrong with me? am I unacceptable
Ugly, just plain wrong?
I still love her, that I know,
But my love is having second thoughts
Why love someone that won't love you back?
Hearts aren't built to be broken
Nor dreams to be crushed
But like a building, they can rise again,
But you must first get rid of the rubble thats in your way
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yah, its pretty old... i cant find any of my others... i havent written many poems...
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wait, is this an old poem or a new one? it seems old...but i like it a lot it's really nice
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great
good poem its rather sad though
but other than that it was great
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thank you... i cant seem to find any of my others, ill put them up when i do
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that is really beautiful i especially loved the line,
'hearts arent built to be broken' it shows true emtion and your pain and frusration was exuding from this poem and without elaboration you have shown how badly love can go wrong not just through rose tinted glasses, well done! Silverwing.
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