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fearing love

Fearing your touch,
your smell invades my senses
overloading my sensibilities
fearing to open up to you

no one to hurt me
i will not consent
these feeling are mine and mine alone
never will you have them!!

Love is strange and hurts to much
my heart is brittle
you have invades it
and left it in pieces

by Georgina Bradshaw

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Written February 5th, 2005

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  • lilblueeyesmine1978
    August 9, 2006
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    this was a great write and I appreciate your sharing it with us. I hope to see more from you in the future. Never stop writing and keep up the good work.. As long as you keep dreaming then your imaginationa dntalent shall never subside. I really liked the way that you worded things. It really speaks to the reader. Fearing your touch, your smell invades my senses
    overloading my sensibilities fearing to open up to you
    no one to hurt me i will not consent these feeling are mine and mine alone never will you have them!! Love is strange and hurts to much my heart is brittle you have invades it and left it in pieces