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Isnt It Cold Darling?

Its cold outside
Cant you tell?
Were all so Drunk
Darling where are you going?
With No shoes or Jacket.
Just a shirt and pants.
Running around the house he goes
Watching my baby run
Screaming words so random
"The British are coming"
Run down his lips
I wonder whats going on in his head
In he comes, and i ask why
He said "Just Warning the Neighbors"

Author notes

Iam So Blonde and Proud Of It ( Iam a Female Writing About my Boyfriend)

*Hole point, Is One day my boyfriend ran around his house screaming the birtish are coming,and the nieghboors started freaking out,cause there like 82,Lmao* Good Luck Everyone!
Written February 4th, 2005

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  • BlooQKazoo
    March 3, 2005
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    lol hahaha scaring old people is fun fun fun!!


  • angelica silver member
    February 16, 2005
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    Congratulations on your SILVER TROPHY angelica

  • Princess2006
    February 14, 2005
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    LMAO This was an awsome write. It put a smile on my face and at one point made me giggle. Great write. Keep up the good work.
    God Bless,
    Kate


  • True Love Gal
    February 14, 2005
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    LoL, this was cool. Keep it up...


  • jenelda silver member
    February 7, 2005
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    LMBO this is hilarious, oh goodness, hope your neighbours are ok I love it Mia jen

  • LunarKnight
    February 7, 2005
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    lol, that is funny. the funny thing, though, is that my friends and I would probably do stuff like that without being drunk. yeah, we're special like that.


  • Exo
    February 6, 2005
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    whew, its a good thing the neighbors didn't have heart attacks. I would of freaked out if my neighbor was screaming about the british! This was funnny! lol

    -nicci


  • BabyMia
    February 5, 2005
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    Thanks everyone for comenting


  • Am8ur
    February 5, 2005
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    this was great, it sounds like something my brother would do what would life be like without the special people???. thanks for the entry. til

  • angelica silver member
    February 5, 2005
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    Well, I hope he had clothes on this is hilarious, I can imagine the poor dears freaking out. angelica
    Thank you for entering our contrsr.
    Good luck.


  • iamfromabove
    February 4, 2005
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    Poor neighbours. (chuckle) At least he had clothes on (chuckle). Good write. I could just imagine it. Mia


  • Soldier933
    February 4, 2005
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    ROTFLMAO!!!! OMFG THIS IS SO GREAT! IM SO SPEECHLESS RIGHT NOW! YOUR BF IS REALLY......UM.....SPECIAL. THIS WAS SO AWESOME. I THINK YOU SHOULD WIN. GOOD LUCK WITH THE CONTEST! ROCK ON!
    cheers!
    *remember the fallen soldiers**

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