Structured as in monolog;
simplistic values... minimized for effect
speaking of nothing;
Empty thoughts of berearvement;
chill bequest.. touches nerves
solitude and hunger... for compassion;
reflective hue.. of mediterranean
summers bleached white..stark
comparison of hides beaten and soft;
oneness.. formed in cushioned
splendor...fragile..opaque;
Silence...broken ;
Mirrored paradox.. speaking
lies, telling of byegone
happiness....of which there was none.
Author notes
Picture credit to Bigmommajen
Written February 4th, 2005
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Wow, your imagry is absolutly amazing (please excuse my spelling). It's completely original, and it's just what I needed to read tonight. Thank you so much for sharing, you really made my evening. This poem is not over-the-top, doesn't use stupid, predictable rhymes, and it flows wonderfully. I really do thank you for sharing your poem, and I wish you the best.
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i love how you put your heart into please read some of mine please
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