A crack like lightning
Bringing a rise to the air
A gasp and wide eyes
Bring a tender red line
Hand cuffs lock around a metal pole
A leather strip around the waist
Sending shivers through lower dominance
Over mind with slight teases of the tongue
Cracking across her back
Going lower every time
Dew forming over the body
And smooth lower regions
Finger tips touching mounds so soft
Rolling over the front, sending thrills throughout
Struggling against inner animalistic needs
Against what binds and gags, moaning, crying
Begging for a harder touch
Leg between the two
Rising up and down to meet
Hoping for just a little
Snatching away the only hope, playing with ice cubes
Gasping and struggling, moaning and writhing
Bouncing mounds, soaking cream pie
Awaiting the final thrust into oblivion
Crack of the searing pain again
Red lines across the front and back
Dripping now, onto the floor
Screaming out loud and wanting more
'Oh please' is muffled through a leather gag
A smirk on the face of her master
Admiring work so thoughtfully done
Wondering now if it's starting to be too much
Coming near, blue eyes revealed
Pushed to the floor on her knees
Commanded to please for release
Tongue swirling, mouth sucking
Rising to the air, tormentor's mouth agape
Touching the throat, almost gagging
Continuing to please for pleasure
And swallowing hot release spurted out
Pushed to stand, one leg held up
A plunge deep within, gasping, so hot
Roughly and harder, almost painful
Crying so loud, for more, even harder
Searing through, hot as lava
Through the body, overpowering the mind
Moving slowly, begging for more
Pulling away, smirking cruelly
Blindfold back on, leather pants zipped up
Teeth undressing in order for more
While red lines cross the skin continues
While fondling breaks the concentration
'If you want more, you'd better earn it.'
Author notes
So, I guess I was wrong about the one entry thing. Must've been thinking about another contest, so here is the bondage.
Written February 4th, 2005
In a list
A contest entry
- Fuck Our Brains Out by Anais.
300 points, ended March 11, 2005, 7 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
What did you think
Comments
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Very hot and steamy. yet another great work. u have done it again
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You can tell me metaphroical description has gotten better. 
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WOO! That was HOT, my dear friend. LOL...I could only laugh at "cream pie," though. That was too much. *Walks off snapping fingers and singing a song under her breath*
S.U.C.K. MY BIG NUTS!
Great writing.
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Darling RDT
There is this cool contest where you put your poem and you indicate a comment to it you particularly like. Well, that way we are collaborating. I think this is one of t hose if you like. Please see this contest. allpoetry.com/Contest/2127513
Smoosh
Janet -
Thank you.
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Darling
You hear yourself whine
held back by twine
tied to a pole
part of your soul.
The wonder of breath
the fascination with death
how much to enjoy
if you still annoy.
Yet you know this
you create some bliss
even if it means
submitting to a fiend.
Stinging from your bruise
blood sweats slightly oozes
and inside you smile
subsumed by her guile.
Smoosh
Janet
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This was one of my first ever tries at this sort of erotica. Glad you enjoyed.
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, gulps, looks around to see if anyone noticed that um, I'm breathing hard. I'm not even into bdsm but wow! Bravo for making me like totally um, excited 
.. Okay, now that I have my mind back in order, um 
I think.. great job. Keep it up. 
Kahy
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Thanks you for your comment. I'm glad this was to your liking since, when I wrote it, I had put a lot of thought into the wording and descriptions. Thanks again for leaving behind a few nice words.
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I would've replied sooner, but the reply system wasn't working, so let me thank you now for your comment. I agree with your words. Just thinking of it makes my mouth water. Thanks again for taking the time to leave a couple of nice words.
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Yes a very well written piece of erotic art with the winning line saved for last. Master ... sprinkled among many of my pens and those written for me . You did a great job walking us vividly down the corridor of pain as pleasure and the control exhibited while complete total freedom and trust willing given, bravo.
~~~~Love and Light~~~~
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Ana is right. That last line just made me smile in the best kind of way. As much as I appreciate sharp, short poetry, sometimes there's nothing better than long vivid descriptions to get the blood flowing in all the right places.
And of course, bondage mixed with soaking cream pie can definitely be very delicious.
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I remember saying that it made me think about/realize what I'd like and wouldn't like. It a really good poem and good imagry too. Very good job as you got in top 12 with it too.
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Blindfold back on, leather pants zipped up
Teeth undressing in order for more
While red lines cross the skin continues
While fondling breaks the concentration
hahaha... i like the ending!! woo woo... thumbs up!!
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Good job sweetie
OH and
Good luck in the contest
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LOL. That ending just made me smile in the best way. What a wonderful example of bdsm! I really enjoyed this. It was almost too spelled out for my tastes, but heck, I just can't help but enjoy something like this. You had moments of incredibly imagery which I enjoyed... like "bouncing mounds" lol. I liked that.
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Nicely done!!!!!!!!! You are getting really good at this! I'm realy proud of the way your erotica is blossoming...Great job, keep up the great work!
Tory Lin
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cool, this was a fun read. I was just in the mood for some kinky reading and this really fit the bill. Keep up the great work. >;o)
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