Perfect strength I see in you
Rush of emotion you bring through your writing
In me forever as I read and I've
Never looked up to someone as much as you; I
Could never feel such wonder in anything
Else or anyone I could ever come across
Such a way with words and emotion, not to mention
Such passion in swivel of hips and fire down there
Much appreciation goes out to you
Under your approval, I feel
So honored to know that you think I have that
Erotic touch and the talent to prosper
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Someone so sweet and loving
I am so blessed to know
Continuously driving on
I look up to that strength
That carries her on
Everything she is
Is what I'd like to be like
Strong and stubborn
Beautiful and kind
Someone I'm blessed to know
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Written February 4th, 2005
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I'm glad you have people to talk to about stuff. I know I'm not great or the best help for certain things/subjects, so I'm really glad you have others.
This was a very beautiful poem... as the writings of the person mention. Excellent job. -
She's an awesome person
Her stories are wonderful and she's just a sweet heart all around. A tribute well deserved for her Wonderful job sweetie 
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Very cool tribute to someone who has touched your life. You executed this so well, in the words you chose and the format you went with, that it is truly inspiring. I dare say that it had a great impact on your target audience as well!
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You have me in tears my dear...I feel so honored...This is as beautiful as you are...Your writing is amazing and I see you growing more and more each and every day...If I have even one ounce of inspiration to do with I am speechless...Thank you from the bottom of my heart.
Love Tory Lin
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