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THIS IS PART OF EDNA's "randyhornbag" HARDCORE EROTICA COLLECTION



i met him at a party and he seemed so very sweet
we flirted for a while and then we tasted tongues
but that was all we did as i was not alone
he asked me for a date and i thought o well why not.....

we met in a cafe and we talked and laughed and kissed
and he took me to his home and soon into his bed
we stroked and got all wet and then he gave it to me
his cock was long and thick and he made me come so hard.....

the bedroom door was opened and i understood too well
two men dressed in leather stood waiting for their turn
and i knew my life might never be the same
it was what i'd dreamed about to be treated like a whore.....

their cocks were huge and hard and they used them well on me
one cock in my mouth and one cock in my cunt
and one slipped up my waiting virgin anus
pumping salty sperm into my eager orifices.....

they never said a word as they spit-roasted me
no sounds except for cries of dark hormonal lust
they fucked my fucking brains right out
just one single cock could never sate me again.....


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Author notes

Still up for some smut? Right! Off you go to allpoetry.com/poem/1046234 ! Please applaud both this and the new one.....
Written February 4th, 2005

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Comments

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  • mantis180
    July 10, 2005
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    I did love this poem. A lot... for personal reasons


  • DonnaSanford
    July 9, 2005
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    OMG this is so graphic I love it. You stated one of my fantasies
    to the letter. This is really good. Best of luck in the contest.


  • Morial
    July 4, 2005
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    *coughs* I know the feeling...

    I love group sex.


  • Edna Sweetlove
    July 3, 2005
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    Aha! And what sort of hip-hopping do you do and where do you do hop your hips?


  • Vampstress silver member
    July 3, 2005
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    Yes I did get them and must say thank you very much for being honest as sometimes I wonder if my poems are really any good or if people are just candy coating. Vampstress is actually my hip hop stage name that I have had for about ten years now so it may be a little cheesy but it's mine LOL.
    Edited on Jul 03, 7:14 because ''.


  • Edna Sweetlove
    July 3, 2005
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    Did you get my previous IM and the comments I put on your poems? You have a way with words too! One suggestion: your nom de plume may confuse some as they will think "Aha!!! Another vampyr (mis-spelled) fan". I know what a vamp is but sadly many will think it's an abbreviation for vampire. Such is modern education.


  • Vampstress silver member
    July 3, 2005
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    This is definately hot. It has a sexy mystique about it. You have a pretty good way with your words that provoke some strong imagery. Nice twist, thanks for entering and good luck.


  • GauArrowny
    June 20, 2005
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    I must say very interesting write. Definitely not something I'd expect from your penname, but then again, alter egos wouldn't be so obvious without the complete opposite qualities. Heh. Best of luck in the contest.

  • - Kirsten -
    June 20, 2005
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    this is really hott. i like your image of being a whore, very sexy, erotic. i loved the description and your choice of words, this is a very, very dirty poem, i loved it!!! great job!
    good luck
    --kirs


  • Lucky-Charm
    June 17, 2005
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    Whew,that was hott!! This could be a treat for a sexual fantasie!Goodluck in the contest.


  • BlackVenom
    February 28, 2005
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    WOW!! This was absolutely amazing! You opened some very strong emotions inside me with these words!!
    DEFINATELY KEEP WRITING!!! AWSOME!!


  • NoUseForAName
    February 23, 2005
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    More like porn than erotica- but interesting none-the-less. Glad I read through the comments, I was going to bring up the lack of punctuation- but I see it's a choice you've made- that's cool.


  • Deviantpoetess
    February 19, 2005
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    interesting

    Low and Dirty well thats erotic right? and think about it with poetry anything fits as long as it's worded properly..then again This line was definetly an eye catcher
    "no sounds except for cries of dark hormonal lust"
    I love it!
    Thanks for sharing
    Best Wishes
    Lori~


  • Edna Sweetlove
    February 8, 2005
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    Whilst I (Edna) always stick to STRICT grammar, my alter ego ("randyhornbag") is trendy and stylish.....she never does capitals in poems - it's a deliberate choice like e e cummings - nor does she do much in the way of punctuation except an occasional dash here and there -
    Edited on Mar 02, 5:22 p.m. because ''.


  • Rayven
    February 8, 2005
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    This is kind of sad in a way, but if it's someone's dream, them more power to them for having it come true. There's not really much else to say, except that I think capitalization would do this piece wonders. Nice job.

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