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Blue Eyes

Beautiful smiles
wrap themselves
within blue eyes.

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Written February 4th, 2005

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  • Crazi Beautyful
    February 27, 2005
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    Wooooo very nice job ! i like this alot ..probably cuz i got blue eyes but this is beautiful i love it !

  • purification
    February 4, 2005
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    Beautiful and simple.


  • ceXee
    February 4, 2005
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    interesting!