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make me break me

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You mold me
you shake me
you make me
you break me
you tease me
you please me
you satisfy my "need be"
You want me
you have me
you gotta be my ecstasy
You wanna be inside me
all night ride me
Grab me
rub me
suck me
*F*** me
deliver me
tranquilize
satisfy
hypnotize

Author notes

If only I could give you the tune in my head as to how this flows omg yeah! Talk about a killer song I cant wait till chris sings it
Written February 4th, 2005

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  • IrrefutableBliss
    February 21, 2005
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    Wow. This was hot.. but not in a dirty way! Great poem. I liked the continuos rhyme. Great work. Keep it up.

    Becca


  • Dutch Doll
    February 16, 2005
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    Loved the poem and pic though I'm not sure I'd stick it on an erotica poem cause the children in it, but hey, I'm strange like that


  • Lady Christian silver member
    February 7, 2005
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    now his pic is up but that pic is like 4 years old bc the baby is his daughter, she is 4 now lol
    Edited on Feb 07, 2:07 p.m. because ''.


  • NurseChilly gold member
    February 5, 2005
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    Purrttyy damned hot stuff here girl.. lolololololol tickle me toes and then some
    heheheh

    ~GILL~xxx


  • Trilliana
    February 4, 2005
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    dude, that's awesome... sounds like what I want right now... damnit, I need a cold shower now... *hides*

  • starlightstarbright
    February 4, 2005
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    i like this poem alot it has a really nice flow..........i like the words you used too....keep writing ....i look forward to reading more of your works


  • Ancientson
    February 4, 2005
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    Great!

    Intense rap erotica here!
    Get it on HellaKewl!


  • Madeo
    February 4, 2005
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    nicely wrote, i like it, keep up the great work

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