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you touched my life, my heart, and my soul

mistreated

unwanted

unappreciated

unloved

execrated

alienated

despised by everyone

alone I felt in the middle of a crowd

condemned to a life of lonliness in hell

untill I met you

I was always hateful and mean to everyone

how was I supposed to act

when every friend turned into a foe

I longed to have someone that I could just talk to

and not have them make it into something awfull

I needed someone who could just understand and not second guess me

and help turn the complex into simplistic meanings

all I needed was a true friend

who wouldn't turn their back on me, or be double faced

then I met you, you came into my life

not to hurt me like every one else had done in the past

but to help me out and be a friend

I think you knew thats what I truely needed

the unthinkable turned into my reality

for once my life turned out the way it was supposed to be

a life of darkness I had thought awaited me

no longer scared me into thinking I hated myself

you kept on telling me that I could be better

and I didn't have to be mean and hurtfull like every other

for once I listened to you I took your advise

you made me a better person and a hell of friend all at once

if it wasn't for you

I don't know if I would be the person I am right now!

so I blame you for my kindness today

-thankyou


for everything...

I think I owe you my life












Author notes

thank you so much kelly i know that at first our friendship was crap, but i used to be a horrible person.  You turned me into a person like yourself sweet ,careing, loveable and honest thank you for everything you have done for me. I couldnt have asked for a better friend i owe you my life and i just hope that you know its from my heart.
Written February 3rd, 2005

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  • KirisutoHanyou
    February 4, 2005
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    ::huggles you tightly:: Aw, bre, I had no idea this was about me. I'm so glad you feel like this, it makes me so happy to know that I've touched you life this much. And about our friendship, I think it's finally taking a turn for the better. Things just seem to be falling into place more, and I think with swimming here it'll get even better. Back to your poem (and your author comment) I know that it's from your heart, and it just makes me so happy that you're finally starting to feel happy now too. I'm so glad that we're friends, and I hope we continue to be friends though thick and thin and all that jazz ^^ I love you, Bre, you're an awesome friend.