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Make A Choice

A shadowless spirit,
No-Named, Unknown,
How are you today?
How can you be
Real?
Your faithless followers,
children of the middle-ground –
how dare you shirk your duties
towards community,
towards the true God,
whoever He may be.
Make your choice,
kill your anonymous wanderer,
face your personal truth and
seize the day with an actual
Being beside you.
Find your home, your community;
Uncertainty has met its match.

Author notes

I chose #4 - to write a poem about how my religion is false. My religion is agnosticism...so yeah.
Written February 3rd, 2005

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  • ecrivain01
    February 20, 2005
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    Clever and cutting.