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I am sorry

Don't forget our friendship
Because we have known each other too long
If I have hurt you by what I did or said
I'm sorry, I was wrong.
Our friendship is a blessing
We need to work at it, to make it strong.
So let us stay friends now
Because good friends need to know where they belong.

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Written February 3rd, 2005

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  • Fortune
    April 14, 2005
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    hello how are u today

  • CloudedMind
    March 10, 2005
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    I truely hope that the person this poem is directed at forgives you. You are a true friend to offer such a heartfelt appology, sorry is sometimes hard to say. WEll done on a great poem, take care.


  • silver bugs
    February 5, 2005
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    Aw, I'm sorry if this is true and I hope the person forgives you. This poem is very emotional and straight from the heart...Very touching, and very true. Thanks for sharing and keep up the stunning work. This is beautiful.
    ~Lana


  • Fortune
    February 4, 2005
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    thanks alot

  • Momentaryhappiness
    February 4, 2005
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    Luke, I dont know if you actually mean what you've written here, but if you do, then well done, and good for you. (not talking to him at school though isnt a good start)
    Anyway this is a gd write. I agree gd friends do need to know where they belong.
    Dani

  • SixPennyGirl
    February 4, 2005
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    your right when you say good friends need to know where they belong. only thing is knowing when you hav ea good friend or someone who is their temporarily and not forever9well longer than a month anyways) nice write

    rae x

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