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Realization of a Constant

the one thing ive needed
was right here.
it is.
its right here.
i understand You now.
im ready.
finally.
You have everything now.
i trust You.
and thats so hard.
but i trust You.
with everything.
even people i cannot trust,
i trust to Your care.
i love You.
finally.

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Written February 3rd, 2005

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  • thephoenixweeps
    March 17, 2005
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    It's little and sweet. It sounds like a child's prayer, short, pretty words barely strung together. So sweet and cute!


  • Ember Rose
    February 7, 2005
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    Interesting how you put into so few words your thoughts. May you learn to trust and never have it abused. Love, trust et al are very valuable and should be respected in order for them to thrive. rose