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You Know

I'm a little silly
A little serious
And I have fun even
When I'm the only one
In the room

I have been there
Where you are sitting
And I have cried
There in the gloom.

But I can help you
If you let me
I can dance you to the stars.

And I can laugh
Or cry there with you..

Whatever you need.

I'm here.

Author notes

Hey Melanie...you know I care.  And I know this is a shitty piece of poetry, but it comes from the heart.  I know you'll never see this because I'll never tell you, but I will try to show you anyway.
Written February 3rd, 2005

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  • Carly Pop gold member
    September 6, 2006
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    perfect

    this is an absolute masterpiece, simple strokes of caring
    within a frame filled with compassion. I can picture it! sorry that was bad!


  • sherrie baby xox
    February 6, 2005
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    i relate completely to this. luv it~
    ~sherr~