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you are my bleeding valentine

Red hearts cut from paper,
    slice you with their edges.

        Choke on cinnamon hearts,
                   and chocolate cake.

               The Valentines day monster,
   is here to slaughter you.

                      Valentines day is a day of horrors,
              the day of      granny's      death.

       Saint or not,
              this holiday should rot.

               This year i'll be sending,
                          valentines day cards.

Entitled, Be my valentine!
                So I can    eat    your   heart    out!

                           Rip open your chest,
          grab your throbbing pump.

             Tear     it     out    by your aorta,
  cut   it   up    and send it to my friends.

             Save a piece for myself,
               to have with my pink cupcakes.

          All the while you'll be giggling,
                     over the cards you've gotten.

                           The flowing blood  blends,
 with your stupid red valentines day clothes.

      As i substitute your heart,
                   for a red paper one.
                                  With lace.

                           And fill your viens,
         with cinnamom hearts.

After all,
           isn't that what you wanted?

                  A red paper heart to call your own,
                         from a dear friend.

                        Happy Valentines Day!

Author notes

valentines day is a rediculous holiday designed for you to waste your money and distract you from real problems. Have fun baking your cupcakes while the world is being distroyed.
Written February 3rd, 2005

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  • ArmorXForXSleep
    November 22, 2008

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    I really really love this poem It's entertaining and I can sense alot of pain and aggeravation in those lines I can really relate to this as well it's GREAT!


  • thewriterwithin
    March 13, 2005
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    Wow, what an awesome poem. I love the format and the rhyme of it. I agree, Valentines day is a ridiculous holiday. Great write, I really enjoyed reading it.

    Take Care,
    Jasmine


  • Sarahn2boys
    February 4, 2005
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    Wow, this poem has some really great flow and rythym, i like it. However, personally i think it's kind oof morbid. Why do you look down on valentines day so much. When i felt lonely and valentines day was coming i also felt like this. but some people have found love, and love is truly a wonderful thing, even though it hurts us sometimes. keep up with the good writes. God Bless, love, Angel