Whisper
you call to me
telling me of your love
ever so softly adore me
Breathless
Natasha D. ~ Jan 31st 2005
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still working on cinquains, these are addictive once you get the hang of them! 
Written February 3rd, 2005
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Hey Tasha, This is a sweet little poem, so much emotion, so little words!
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Wow. That was so amazing. I loved it. Short and beautiful and breathtaking. Write on. ~~SpydurPoet~~
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Ohhh okay...i was like..uh..i didnt get it at first but now i do....sweet poem!!! keep it up tash....oh! i stole your name for my Open window series...kinda..sorry
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oooohh i really like this structure thing you got going on, it really emphasizes the beauty of the poem. its all..I don't know how to describe it....like wshhhh like breathy air I don't know I just really like poems like that its a really good poem it made me smile lol
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