One stupid lie was all it took.
The beginning page of a very sad book.
He left me alone for way to long.
And what came next, well it was wrong.
It soon came the day when I had to confess,
so I made up a story to try and compress.
But the truth came back and bit me in the ass.
Into his heart like a sharp piece of glass.
A friend of his and one summer night.
Was taken over by all of my spite.
My moment of weakness was also my glory.
And in a friend I confided my story.
My friend who is now to me just a bitch.
The one who opened her mouth to snitch.
She's wanted all of what I have from day one.
But it was me after all to hand her the loaded gun.
I thought I could trust her not to say what she knew.
But instead she told everyone and our friendship is through.
I could do the same to her, try and ruin her life.
Should I return her favor and twist her knife?
Be strong for a change and move on with life.
Do all that you can to still be his loving wife.
I fell very guilty but I except all the blame.
He forgives me, for he's done some of the same.
To him I was perfect, always one he could trust.
Can I win back his heart? Yes I must!
This should've been the battle I let you win.
How do I say I'm sorry where can I begin?.
You've had my whole heart from day one.
But what has happened cannot be undone.
I can only tell you how much I love you,
and hope you can tell me you still love me too.
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Written February 3rd, 2005
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This was sad, yet also hopeful. The words you chose were wonderful and the way you composed it was great. The rhyme and flow were good and kept me interested. The subject matter... well i can relate, but we won't go there. well done
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Ahh rut roo Angie I smell me a rat here Sister Wench.. So she tried to tell? lol stupid child. You were honest first.. Gotta give ya credit for that huh angel babe? Girl I loved every bit of this, and I want to fly up there and beat this child for ya( cause I am your friend and REAL FRIENDS DO THAT) Nice to see you are writing again. I have missed it. Much Love, Cat
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wow. this is a really good poem! it seemed to me the rhymes were a bit forced but im not an expert! i think its a really good poem and i can relate to most of it.
You've had my whole heart from day one.
But what has happened cannot be undone.
I can only tell you how much I love you,
and hope you can tell me you still love me too.
This part really got me. im sure that most people can relate to that part. good write!!! write on sister of the pen!!!
Sarah Rose
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