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A Fool Fooled

When you said you loved me
I was only a fool fooled by you
Cause once I fell in love
I found your love was untrue

I'm not sure I saw it coming
Not like there was anything I could do
You do what you want without thinking
Cause now I'm gone and we're through

You came up with these lame excuses
but whats done is done
You took my heart and broke it
I was stupid to think you were the one

I'll remember you forever
If you choose to do the same or not
You'll always have a piece of me
Even if our 'love' wasn't what I thought

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Written February 2nd, 2005

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  • midnight eyes
    March 11, 2005
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    nice poem keep it up


    Amber

  • DeadAlive3
    February 6, 2005
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    ahh dez i just reread it an did shit i knew i could have done different to make it better! aww oh well

  • MoNiK
    February 4, 2005
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    Nice poem... ...

  • SmOkeY14
    February 4, 2005
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    awww crystal...this poem is so cute.....keep it up...... Love yah
    Desiree