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Off

Where doth thee be off to?
--Off to sail the world?
--May I join you on your travels?
--We can see sunsets and rises!
--And visit every nation!

Where doth thee be off to?
--Off to see a friend?
--Might I accompany thee on thy visit?
--We could laugh like old friends!
--And we can pretend to enjoy everything about eachother too!

Where doth thee be off to?
--Off to be alone?
--May I go with you
--We could lie silently in grazing grass
--and ponder life itself.

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Written August 12th, 2004

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  • Ee
    February 7, 2005
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    lye means like "lye down on a bed"

  • Ankeeta silver member
    February 7, 2005
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    ahan that`s a good one indeed...what does "lye" mean


  • February 2, 2005
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    Wonderful

    I really enjoyed reading this poem. It was admirably different and well written. Keep up the great work and let your talent continue to shine.