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Can You or Can You Not?

Can you or can you not
take me into your heart,
love me as I love you,
see me as I see you?

Can you care for me,
value and see me though
my dark times as I
lead you through yours?

Are we still in the same boat,
or am I always to sail alone?
Will you or will you not
simply tell me how you feel?

Author notes

o.o' Razz again.
Written February 2nd, 2005

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  • fallingintofate
    April 26, 2005
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    Heeeey...Jacky says that to Will in PotC! ^_^ Yeah...

    Anywho, lovely poem.


  • GypsyRoseDancer
    February 3, 2005
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    It's sort of strange, because outside AP she doesn't act like this. Or maybe that's just the AU of the different roleplays. It's sort of strange, but she writes nicely. Oh....wait a second -

    YES!

    *pause**cough* You just broke my fucking writer's block. *snags Rio and stalks off after Staga* C'mere you...

    Thank Razz for me.

    Bethany

  • FallenKitsune
    February 2, 2005
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    *poketh* Razz makes pwetty poetry doesnt she? Which means he needs to respond mebbe? Or just kinda snuggle her lol she needs a good snuggle...and more catnip. *tosses a few catnip toys to her and cackles*