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Bring me that fire, my love.

I have bound you to the bed, my love,
And removed all of your clothes.
The moon dances on your milky skin,
And your beauty steals my breath.

No longer can I wait to touch you.
Your breath pants between parted lips,
As I slip my tounge between them.
The scent of you intoxicates my being.

My hands roam purposefully along your body,
And every moan from you sends shivers through me.
My lips kiss their way down your body,
And linger on your supple breast.

You gasp as I draw your nipple into my mouth;
You writhe and arch beneath me with pleasure.
I move lower in search of sweeter temptations,
As the fire in you draws me nearer.

I can feel your pleasure building;
It envelops you like a loving embrace.
Moaning and gasping you undulate beneath my touch.
I feel the tension surmount within as you scream.

Our sweat dewed bodies slide over each other,
While you revel in the aftermath of climax.
I unbind your hands and you secure mine in place.
"You're turn," you croon sweetly to me.

"Bring me that fire, my love."
My breath quickens already.
Oh, nothing could ever surpass this.
The love of woman to woman.

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I had fun writing this!
Written February 2nd, 2005

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  • blood tourniquet
    September 6, 2006
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    Oh so you are still together with her?
    By the way, I always say that girls are better in bed then boys (at least I think ) they care more about the pleasure of their girl
    Muahaha awesome

    I'm going to read some of your works again if you don't mind

    Blessed Be
    blood tourniquet


  • TwistedBloodyLilly silver member
    September 5, 2006
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    Thank you!

    Thank you! Yes she was. Getting my girl off is the biggest turn on to me; I guess you could say I'm a PLEASER! Thank you for the wonderful comment and have a good time!
    Blessed Be
    ~Lilly~

  • blood tourniquet
    September 5, 2006
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    Vey very good write! Have you ever got a girlfriend? She must have been delighted with a temping bride like you
    muahaha

    Wicked write! I will stay here for a while

    Blessed Be

  • ApatheticEmotions
    February 4, 2005
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    Wonderful

    You are a beautiful poet Joy. Oh and by the way this is Dee...my AllPoetry is GoddessOfTheMoon.

  • LostAndBroken7
    February 2, 2005
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    lesbo bondage action YES!!!! hehe great work and thanks for entering again. Josh

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