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Addiction

Always there at the back of my mind
always harsh and never kind
Breaking the will an sapping the soul
Always tormenting taking its toll
The longing is unbearable the need immense
Longing forever for just one more kiss.

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A long day at school
Written February 2nd, 2005

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  • Sponge
    March 31, 2006
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    I like this one, I can really relate, longing for something that you can never have, but not being able to stop longing for it..Great work.


  • Scarlett silver member
    February 2, 2005
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    :: giggles :: Valentine's Day isn't too far away.

    I've written something like this before -- maybe several, in fact.

    Amazing write!

    <33


  • DontKnowNothin
    February 2, 2005
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    wow that is great. i love the last line, i can relate to that part for sure! -lol- keep up the great poems ^.^
    ~Crystal


  • dolltrashhh-
    February 2, 2005
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    i really liked this alot, short but sweet and right to the point, i've felt like this before and i still do because my boyfriend doesn't live by me and i hardly ever get to see him and when i'm not with him i yearn for his kiss and to be in his arms, but back to your poem i really liked this alot it was really good too. i hope to read more from you soon, comment on some of my writtings too if you don't mind. keep writting
    -oxbeautifuldisaster