oh little sparrow
why do you sing such sad songs--?
weeping in willows
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nature’s orchestra
pirouetting through the clouds
a sparrows ballet
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hidden in flowers
feathers flying - having fun--
in their birthday suits
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Written February 2nd, 2005
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excellent
To write a poem of a number of stanzas in haiku form is indeed really clever. This is a delightful poem. Once again showing what a soft and generous soul you are.
Excellent
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Jan -
Awe, very nice, sweet little poem.
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Thank you so much
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This haiku is so sweet! And the background just adds an extra touch. i love it!
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Absolutely beautuiful!
What a sweet haiku, I can completely see and hear your little sparrow!
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Oh I love this birds and dance go so well together you made a perfect marriage between both subjects. Great job and keep up the great work.
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This is so sweet. I adore sparrows, all birds actually, and this summed them up nicely with all of their frolicking happiness. Thank you for sharing such a gem
Blessed be
~~Serenity~~
Billie Jean -
the background is beautiful as is your poem, little sparrows in their birthday suits, its cute to visualise. excellent
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Very well done
I can just picture the little birds in their birthday suits This background is absolutely perfect. Good luck in the contest
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