I hope you know how special you are,
that your tenderness has warmed my heart.
Your loving words encourage me on.
You deserve a birthday full of love,
with lots of hugs and kisses as well.
Your very own star to wish upon.
You are such a sweet and gentle soul,
giving friendship that's one of a kind.
Spreading love to each and everyone.
When sadness invades my aging heart,
you are always there to comfort me.
To make sure I'm not staying withdrawn.
You have a great talent for writing,
I've been blessed by your exquisite words.
Each one flows with the grace of a swan.
Happy Birthday to a dear sweet friend,
hope you celebrate a whole lot more.
I'm glad I could be part of this one.
Author notes
I used a form I made up,
Tri-Rhew allpoetry.com/Contest/640240
Choice #1
I read~
Wrapped In Love
by poetryality
One last sunset,
by Captured-Spirit
Written February 2nd, 2005
In a list
A contest entry
- birthday love by queenie.
500 points, ended February 12, 2005, 6 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
What did you think
Comments
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GREAT POEM
Hi, it was my birthdat two days ago, and I will keep this poem for me to read and share with others. Thank you,Meagan. -
This was just adorable. I could feel the emotions, so sweet and sincere, floating off this page. YOu are a marvelous writer, so well, actually that I'm afraid to enter my poem. LOL! Great job and good luck!
Jess -
you gave me a very special gift.i love the tri-rhew for a couple of reasons and having a write to me in this form makes it even more endearing.it feels like i have been given a truckload of gifts all at one time.i will have this to read over and over again.i will have you as a friend forever because there is no way that i could get you out of my heart.your halo will always shine to let me to you spiritually.thank you for being you.
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Oh Sam, this is so beautiful. I had forgotten about this form. I will have to go back and look at it. I will use it again soon as well. Yes, queenie is a spirited, helpful soul, and it is a blessed event for her to be able to celebrate another year, and with us. This is just beautiful. You are one of the greatest people here at AP, and always talking about how good others are. LOL I love you Sam, and wish you well in this challenge. queenie will delight in her "own star" I am sure.
Renee ♥
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