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Dream Time

The snow falls lightly
As she hear him say
Those three words
She’s been waiting for day by day

She turns to face him
His golden eyes shine
As he say’s
“You’ve been mine all this time”

Her heart flies high
Her dreams come true
She looks up and say’s
“I love you two”

She closes her eyes
He catches her in a kiss
It could last forever
It is a godly bliss

She open’s her eye’s
And can’t believe
It wasn’t real
It was all a dream

She sits there wondering
What it would have been like
If she really did kiss him
Then she hops on her bike

As she rides along
She sees him there
He’s dreaming away
She wonders if he cares?

Author notes

hello to all inuyasha fans out there...this probly isn't the best poem you've read about kagome's and inuyasha's feelings but there is a part 2 to this poem.. it will be inuyasha's side but you'll ahve to wait till i can get back on the computer...hope u enjoyed it!!
PS: this poem was inspired by the AMV "I will always love you"..if u have ever seen it then you know that its quite sad but it still is amazing!
Written February 2nd, 2005

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  • mikka
    February 4, 2005
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    aww it was so cute! the love between a girl and her bicycle! how sweet! lol i'm just kidding i know she wasnt in love with her bike but that could make for an interesting poem....hmmmmm lol! Now for the sad news! i cant change my schedule for school! this is going to be a very VERY long second semester! oh well at least we'll have lunch as long as that doesnt change!

  • Neko
    February 3, 2005
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    awww thanks jess....and u'll just have to wait and see wat its about.. so ..lol..why did u miss inuyasha last night HUH????? i question how u tell time...lol..j/k kk thanks again tootles
    ~jackie

  • Mnaxcvkj
    February 3, 2005
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    hello jackie!
    this was a very nice poem that you have written. Is the next one gonna be about what Inu feels about kagome???? huh??? i hope so! ah!!! i missed inuyasha last night! im so sad!! anyways... good poem! keep up the good work!
    luv jess
    *hands you a magenta monkey*