Falling mist
The ground gently kissed
With beads of nature's tears
Shimmering in the sun as a rainbow appears
The red summer sun will be setting as dusk nears
Asleep, another night passes through
Sunrise shimmers anew
Morning dew
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Written February 1st, 2005
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I hate mornings but this poem made me like them just a little more!
Mylee -
Thirst quenching
servings of fresh dew in a spoon
a delight on a summery noon
leaves me refreshed for the eve!
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Beautiful
I love this. So much said with so few words. Beautiful imagery - I particularly like 'beads of natures tears'.
I also like the way you shaped it. Is there a name for poetry like this?
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Ooooh I like how you did that butterfly thing. Oh right and the poem itself is awesome.
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Thank you so much for the wonderful comment. I love trying out this form. I was surprised to win the gold on my first try at this form. Take care, Sandy
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Wow you make me smile with such a warm and lovely comment. Thank you I appreciate it. Take care, Sandy
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Now this was great! I could feel the misty dew all about. Your imagery is enlightening! You earned the GOLD with ease with this write. CONGRATULATIONS!
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This was very lovely. Your words so beautiful and this form is also beautiful, congrats on your gold! WEll deserved!
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Thank you for the lovely comment. I appreciate it. And thank you again for the trophy and points. Take care, Sandy
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oh this is just gorgeous.. its funny dew is so tiny and beautiful but so often over looked.. lovely piece 'With beads of nature's tears' i have never heard such a beautiful description
thanks for entering
i enjoyed
shanelle -
It sure is nice to read something as light and bright as this one is. The last one I wrote was dark and gloomy. Not at all what I like to read. This is just beautiful and it helps to take that dark picture out of my mind. Very pretty.
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Well, I finally got caught up on my comments. (for now). Thank you for leaving this lovely comment. I always sincerely love your comments. They are like a dose of sunshine. I love when I get 2 teaspoons in the same day.
Well I guess I will read some of my favs and your poems before I det busy again. Take care my dear friend. , Sandy :0 
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Thank you so nuch Mia for the warm and lovely comment. I always love to here from you. I get busy and you always remind me to take the time to read your poems. Take care, Sandy
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Very beautiful
Awww Sandy, the first thing I said when I clicked on your page, and outloud "This is pretty" and the poem and form is beautiful...I have a favorite part, With beads of nature's tears Shimmering in the sun as the rainbow appears, lovely, gosh, I needed this smile today! All the best in the contest, I really like this form...(I'm still staring at it's beauty) Ann
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Oh I really like this. I like the rhyme scheme a lot, and your imagery...It's very pretty. Great job!
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