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My friend Linian

My friend linian who no one else can see,
is quiet odd looking but he makes me happy.
he has very thin legs but is rather fat,
orange beady eyes, and he moves like a cat.
linian has incredibly greecy hair,
and hes covered in the stuff like a cuddly bear.
I sit with him and look at flowers,
I wander about there ins and outs,
I think about these wanders,
then I ponder these thoughts,
then I drift into sleep,
and I dream of all sorts.

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Written February 1st, 2005

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  • styx-angel
    February 3, 2005
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    i wish i had a funny looking friend like that..my friends are unfortunately eith really pretty...or normal looking...but otherwise it was a cute poem i really liked it!

  • Mnaxcvkj
    February 1, 2005
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    this was cute! and i liked it! i think that you did a nice job on it... hehe. i wish he was my friend! lol but umm...in case you want to correct it... it's greasy. i dunno. lol okay then awesome job!
    jess