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Rebecca 2

\I've been feeling hate
for the past days eight
She'd been forced to appologize
I'll never understand why\

I wasn't sarcastic
I just don't get it
I wasn't offensive
I've chnged the way I live

As far as friends go she wasn't bad
Its done now though I'm not sad
I don't think I'll miss it
Her cr*p! I don't have to take it

Theres been a change in tide
Now from her I hide
Our friendship is no more
Its just another forgotten lore

\I've been feeling hate
for the past days eight
She'd been forced to appologize
I'll never understand why\

Author notes

It turns out that her mom forced her to appologize I found this out when she was still a jerk to me on our ski trip!
Written February 1st, 2005

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  • incapable
    February 1, 2005
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    effective, thought that this was very good, and i really liked how you repeated the first stanza at the end, that was very good,
    'Theres been a change in tide'
    i thought that this was a really good line, im not sure why i like it so much, but i thought it was really good! well done and keep up the good work!! xxx-xxx