cunning lingua laps
its daring dance captivates
rousing passion’s fire
tantalizing kiss
stimulates fierce arousal
electrifies hearts
sensual heaven
intimate essence entwined
rapture’s inferno
lustful lips explore
nebulous nooks and crannies
exhilarating
Patricia Gibson-Williams
Author notes
I'm not sure if these all have the alternate perspective you wanted for the last line... But I wrote them for this contest. I hope you like. Patti
Written February 1st, 2005
In a list
A contest entry
- Sexy Haiku by Jennifer.
300 points, ended February 16, 2005, 16 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
What did you think
Comments
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They were actually separate haiku’s. Most haiku contests that allow more then one entry let you put them all on the same page so that they don’t have to open as many links to read them. I’m sorry that I didn’t understand that this contest required separate entries, oh well you had some wonderful haiku to choose from so it’s not a big deal. You just might want to make it clear if you hold another contest, because I know you had several others who did the same thing. I'm glad you liked my work. Patti
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These were all good, and I'm sorry we didn't judge them becuase we were looking for only single stanza entries.
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Geepers Patti
These are all very good. Poor a cold bucket of water over me
will ya
I just love the lustful lips one - and - nebulous nooks is a very eritoc image. I enjoyed them all though*
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Good luck
Cotten
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