fallen snow
a cozy bed
fresh sheets~
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Written January 31st, 2005
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Wonderful
Oh my short, but so skillful and great images.
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excellent
Love these words you have used here Sis. The picture looks so inviting too.
A very comfortable senryu.
Ethereal Melody
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excellent
You have said a lot with these 3 lines. I have never written a senryus. I enjoyed thinking about these words.
etherealforu
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We have only had a dusting of snow yet this season. Your picture is beautiful, and that is what I love about snow...the beautiful picture nature paints for us all to view. If you're snuggles up warm and looking out, it is a treat. If you are bundled up and looking in....can be harsh...
Still, I love the picture of your words.
Sam
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Very nice thoughts of reflection Susan
Wonderful little senryu on the reflections of comfort.
Great piece love to ya your friend, Sherry
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Beautiful...simply gorgeous. What more can be said?
~Amanda~ 
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Dear Molly,
I'm sorry that this poem does not contain your usual wealth of detail or description of nature. I am therefore left in a state of acute suspense although I did note you changed the sheets. This is what my friend Mari calls a sexku (at least I think that's what she called it?) I applaud in case I've read too much into your words......
Love and hugs, XXX Hugh. -
What a winter wonderland is viewed from that room! The poem is as crisp as the outdoors. From the looks of that snow, I think I'd have soft flannel sheets and a feather bed! The trees remind me of gigantic frosted maple leaves. Klassy
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It's snowing here in Alaska! That sounds liek something one would say a lot, but this winter was quite rainy and lacked snow. So I'm welcoming these snowy fresh sheets with happiness. Snow makes me very happy - not only does it make the world look lighter, it's so fluffy and fun to frolick in. I feel like a child whenever it snows, so I go outside and play with it. sighs Good old days.
Lovely haiku and a beautiful picture.
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Snow is wonderful to view from the a warm, cozy spot. Interesting contrast. Snow is not often pictured with being 'cozy.' A warm fire in the winter, sure. However my fireplace is next to a window with a view of a forest. The scene from the inside is cozy though the outside looks cold.
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As snow falls, even a couch is cosy enough lol
Good one Susan made feel like going under the blankets
Kisses and love,
Mari
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Thanks Don
Appreciate you dropping by and leaving the cute comment
Yeah indeed it is one to think about
and I am heading there
Hugs
Susan~~~
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Thanks Sis Wander for the comments
Yawns I am so sleepy tonight for some reason but just can't seem to drift off
Guess I am going to try and hit the comfy covers once again
Love ya
Your sis
Susan~~~~
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lol.. yeah, this is one to think about....
Don -
Yeah, ya made me sleepy, too, Sis!!! hehehe What a beautiful senryu, Susan...it is so very descriptive, in so few words...it's lovely, my Friend...you're good, ya know!!!
Wander
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Thanks Sis
Glad you liked the pic went back and looked looked and looked
You know how we are about pics and yep it sure looks comfy to me too think I am getting the nightgown and heading under the downy covers myself my eyes are drooping been a long day and as you know from later I have ate all day think my tummy is full and now I have grown yawn rather sleepy
Love ya sis
Susan~~~
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BEAUTIFUL, EXQUISITE!
OH MY!!!!!!!!!! WOW...this sent shivers when I clicked on it...oh sis, this is outstanding! It's it! BEAUTIFUL, how did you find the pic for it?
Blows me away, it's a winner! Amazing! Gives a wonderful feel, which I need very soon, LOL much love and many hugs sis, Ann
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Thanks sis Maureen and Willow
Yep hard to find a window with snow outside and a bed inside lol
But it does look comfy if I say so myself in fact feel like crawling under the warm covers now its cold here and just a tad of snow outside not much light light light thank goodness LOL
Thanks for the comments sis
Love ya both
Susan~~~~
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Nothing like having fresh sheets on the bed to cozy into. That is unless you have someone else in the bed with you hehe Perfectly worded sis, if I do say so myself. It has the 'AHA' refect to it. And the picture is perfect.
Hugs~
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Nice one, Sis! Snow is so pretty to see when I'm nice and comfy.
<3 Maureen
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