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Feelings I Hide

Deep inside
Their hidden deep
It's all there
For no one to see
These feelings I hide
They are mine alone
I'll never show
What I have known
My thoughts of you
Of him and I
Those are the feelings
I try to hide
I dream of him
And say it's you
I long to show
This all to you
But I know I can't
So here I cower
Trying to build
A solid cover
Just let it be
Don't ask why
Just know it's not you
It's these feelings I hide

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Written January 31st, 2005

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  • February 11, 2007

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    Wow, I totally understand where you were coming from when you wrote this poem. You did a great job on this one. Keep'em coming. -JD


  • finding myself 84
    February 6, 2005
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    I believe we all have those hidden feelings deep inside.... You did a wonderful job writing this. Thanks for sharing. Luv ya, *Sonya*


  • BeautyInMyTragedy
    January 31, 2005
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    excellent

    i like it. i know how it feels to hide something from someone and its the reason you act the way you are its very tuff and confuesing but you put it together perfectly i love it keep it up!!