I wake; the dark still reigns in all its glory
The birds begin singing their beautiful story
The sky starts to glow with a subtle light
I lie in wonder; as I watch such a wonderful sight
The sun rises; giving its bright warm light
Shining down with love on everything
To my heart; peace and serenity it brings
Calm and quiet; as the mist rises from the stream
Rays of light; burning through; revealing a wonderful sunbeam
Dew; reflecting like diamonds on the leaves
A more beautiful sight there could never be
So as the morning comes do not let it slip away
For it is the beginning of another beautiful day
Author notes
Jane; even though I do not know you I do know what it is like to not be well and to be in the hospital; I sincerely hope that this will take you back to pleasant memories. Get well soon.
Written January 31st, 2005
A contest entry
- Spring Fever 2 by Heavenly Angel.
300 points, ended March 21, 2006, 7 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Lifted Spirit by Undying Resolution.
500 points, ended January 27, 2007, 14 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Bless Me With A Piece Of You by JoyfulWriter.
450 points, ended January 28, 2007, 15 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Inspiration!!! by Talia.
475 points, ended May 17, 2007, 14 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
What did you think
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Now I would of loved this if it were wrote in a contest of mine.
It kind of reminds me of my own.
Wow!!!
and thanks for it being here to read.
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This is sch a pretty poem, it creates some beautiful and very vivid imagery.
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DEAR TALIA
Thanks ever so much for reading
I do so love the beauty that a bright sprind day brings.
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Kevin, I love this poem. You have captured a sunrise perfectly. I love both sunrises and sunsets and to stand and watch the sky change through its many colours is one of Gods gifts to man and warms my heart every time I witness the event.
Thank you for sharing this with me...Sue
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This is so precious.....written so beautifully from the heart....so perfectly caressed the page and proved to be a blessing to read...Thanks for entering my contest....Good luck....smiles, Terry
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DEAR TERRY
Thanks so very much. When I was little I would wake up on those summer mornings to these sights and sounds, I now look back and know that they were the best times of my life, so peaceful and beautiful.
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Beautiful poem... good imagery... I liked it very much... Thanks for entering!
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DEAR DYING RESOLUTION
Thanks so much for reading this one, those days were so special to me.
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Sandy, this one holds a special meaning for me, it was published by poetry.com and I have the book that it is in. Also, this was for that special lady once again to brighten up her day. So your wonderful comment means the world to me, thank you so very much.
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How very pretty this is, sweet brother! Wonderfully serene! Thank you for sharing and for entering in the contest!
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Thanks my dear Linda
I hope that you don't mind, I sent you a link to a story that I posted at someones request on how I spent my summer days. It is all true. ;f
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WOW! THIS IS A VERY relaxing poem, could see it all ..image of another day, as we know it is going to be some special day..in certain ways.. thank you so much for point this post in my direction..
another wonderful day as like no other..
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I love the warm summer mornings as the sun comes up and burns through the mist rising above a stream. The clear air and the dew soaking my shoes as I walk in the grass. Thanks so very much for this lovely comment; I guess we both appreciate the beauty of nature in the morning
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crysaldust 06-12-05 08:33
Found it! A truly beautiful poem full of the peace of early morning. I love "the dark still reigns in all its glory" and, later, "wonderful sunbeam dew" and "light burning through". Beautiful words and I can feel you breathing in that growing dawn. Thank you for leading me to this one. x Joy -
I myself have been in the hospital all alone with no one to care. I didn't want her to feel that she is alone; there are those of us who won't let that happen.
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Dear Puppyudog,
Although you say you don't know Jane, you have intuitively captured the mood of her early morning strolls along the dunes with her Beaugus (who is the most handsome and intelligent dog that ever existed and who, like us, worships her unreservedly.)
Thankyou for your entry which I know Jane will love.
Applause and best of luck in the contest.
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Thank you very much; I know what it is like to be ill and not able to be with your friends. I sincerely hope that this will bring cheer and brightness to her day.
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If you didn't know it... sunrise is Jane's favorite part of the day. I'm sure she will appreciate your kinds and gentle words. Thanks for your entry and your effort.
Sincerely,
Leo Long
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Dear Michelle; I cannot sit back and let one be alone in a strange place; I do hope she will find a little comfort in this and yes; I will stop by her page. I love to read peoples poems for they convey their hearts and souls in their poems. I am sure that I will truly enjoy her poetry.
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Kevin,
This has such a graceful flow! So peaceful and serene are the visions in ones mind as they read! I know Jane will love this.
Thank you so much for entering!
~Michelle~
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Thanks ever so much as you have brought tears to my eyes with such a lovely comment. This is a morning that I have lived many times as a little boy. I wrote this to bring a little happiness to a lady who was and in many ways still is very special to me.
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excellent
When the light of day brings promise to your heart and you see the power of the sun
You know your heart will fill with joy
for you are a chosen one.
Words I share with special People in my life.
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This is a beautiful poem of warmth and love. Well written and easy flow. Well Done
Hugs
Jan
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I see you have found one of my favorites. This was written for Misty to help her in one of her sad times. It seems that she always seemed to inspire the best that came from my heart
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Oh my. With this one I could feel it. Almost if I was there with you, because I have had this morning.
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Thank you for all of your wonderful patience with me. I thought that this would bring back some memories for you
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Oh My...all of our hard work as truly paid off today My Precious Friend. This is an amazing poem. I have chills as I think of all the beautiful mornings I watched the sun rise from the back of the barn on the ranch. The mist would slowly fade away as I slowly enjoyed my coffee and listened to the animals calling out to each other. Ahhh, such bliss. Thanks for the memories and I am very proud of your hard work this morning. Well done...on the poem and on your computer lesson for today!!
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Thank you so much for the wonderful comment and applaud; they mean so much to me
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great job!
wow, that was a really good poem. Very beautiful I can pracitcally picture it in my mind.. well done!! thanks for the applause and comment on 'my poetry' and thanks for reading the rules. Good luck! I'm glad you decided to enter the contest! xXxXx *Jordan** -
Thank you for such a wonderful comment; It means so much to me
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This was so blissful to read. It left me with a smile....If one woke up everyday with that attitude and sight life would be so much more pleasant. Terrific Job! Thanks for entering.
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Great and beautiful piece
Dude you have talent so keep it up.I love how u worded it it's great.Get back as soon as u can k ? Bailey
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