Goodbye
I loved you always
Goodbye
I love you still
Goodbye
I'll be yours for all days
Goodbye
This is my will
Goodbye
I'll think of you for all time
Goodbye
You know I will
Goodbye
You'll be on my mind after I forget to rhyme
Goodbye
And time is still
All I have
(You are, you are my angel)
All I have
(You are, you are my angel)
All I have
(You are, you are my angel)
All I have
(You are my darkest angel)
Goodbye
When did you lose sight?
Goodbye
When did you fall?
Goodbye
And why could you not fight?
Goodbye
I know it all
Goodbye
You are for these times wrong
Goodbye
You know this is true
Goodbye
But for love you needed not wait long
Goodbye
I have come to you
You're all I have
(You are, you are my secret)
All I have
(You are, you are my secret)
All I have
(You are, you are my secret)
All I have
(You are my darkest secret)
So goodnight to you my angel
I have done so much wrong
So goodbye to you my angel
Sleep tight not knowing I'm gone
All I have
(And I mislead you, bleed you)
Still insane
(My loving sweetest angel)
All I have
(I'm surprised that I am still true)
But you remain
(My love, my darkest angel)
So goodnight to you my angel
I have done so much wrong
So goodbye to you my angel
Sleep tight not knowing I'm gone
Author notes
Saying goodbye, until I can treat myself right.
Loving the goodbye, just for being there.
Saying goodbye, because I had to.
Loving the goodbye, for loving me back.
Written January 31st, 2005
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A contest entry
- dark writes + im looking to add to my allpoetry family! by nobodys-girl.
300 points, ended December 19, 2005, 12 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Great!
Once again it appears to me like a lovely song (I was almost singing it while I was reading)Fantastic work.I never knew that one can use a word again and again with such eloquence. -
wow......i wish i could write lyrics like this! it was truly very amazing and so sad...well done i loved it
~mystic
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WOW!!! A great tune, MJ. This has a real melody to it and has lots of deep meaning. you are truly talented never forget that.
~~~~Love and Light~~~~
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Cool Poem Here, im crap at leaving comments, but goood poem anyways!
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wishing I could hear the music
Good job MJ
I enjoyed this too. Keep up the great work and take care
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How did it sound?
I'm glad you enjoyed it, and thank you for the applaud!
Love, MJ -
Thumbs Up!
I really enjoyed that --- I was putting music to it as I read it in my mind...thanks for sharing it!!!!!!! -
Thanks. I wrote the song just now and thought it would be interesting to hear what people thought of it..
Thanks for reading my stuff
Love, MJ -
Good poem. I liked it it's good
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