A Wish For Tonight by poeticweaver at All poetry

Your soul shines bright, my lady love
Like stars twinkling, in heavenly skies
My heart flutters, then skips because
I see an angel in your eyes

Each time you whisper, into my ears
My thoughts do drift, upon your words
For in my dreams, no one compares
To your sweet songs, like humming birds

Every moment, I share with you
You capture time, as it pauses silently
I wish to dream, of love anew
Capturing the you inside of me

Take my hand, marry my heart
For upon the wings of love we soar
As once upon, a midnight spark
This flame burns forevermore

Author notes

Written January 30th, 2005

In a list

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A contest entry

This Is Your Golden Opportunity. by Diamond. 500 points, ended February 13, 2005, 13 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest

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siahaan
October 20
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Wuuooowww
Gabby
March 10, 2005
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Wow!!! They were right. You are brilliant. I absolutely love this. You are a wonderful writer. I luv this. Keep fresh... much luv Gabby
JM Kenyon
February 14, 2005
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Ohhhh....now I see why this poem has a shiny trophy! It is exquisite and romantic! Very smooth flowing and serene. A dream world sort of poem that is just a fabulous read. Best wishes and s ~genielassie~
Cheesy Poof
February 1, 2005
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Wow, this is a great piece...My poem looks like a dead cat next to yours Great job on this one, it flowed so well and felt so nice to read Once again, great job

~Eric~
Diamond
January 31, 2005
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Beauty Beyond Words!
WOW Timothy! I'm touched to the point of tears by the beauty and power of these words you've penned so skillfully and romantically. The words have touched me to my soul and made me reminisce about love lost and yet gives hope for love to return once more. Your use of metaphors were really captivating, "The sweet songs of humming birds" in respect to words spoken by your lady love adds life and imagination to the poem. This is precisely what I've been wanting to see and read. Thank you for your entry Timothy and thanks also for sharing this remarkably beautiful romantic poem with us all. Avirl
MoonFruitPie
January 31, 2005
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Beautiful and romantic. Goodluck in the contest.
Shaza Bluetip
January 31, 2005
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This poem is so beautiful, I really can't elaborate on anything anyone else has already said. It is just simply heartmelting. All love should be as wonderful and deep as you express in this peice.
Sunkissedrose
January 31, 2005
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Simply beautiful. Someone is truly very lucky to have your sweet soul loving them. Keep up the wonderful works, and I'll always be here to read them, and to comment on them. Love to you always my sweet bro.

~Carrie
PowerOfLove
January 31, 2005
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Romanticly Lovely
What a beautiful love poem to your love. Please keep penning for your poetry shines forth the love that is in your heart. Well done. Take care, Heather
queenie
January 30, 2005
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you just keep penning these captivating verses that can melt even the most hardened heart.you bring romance so much back into the game and for that i thank you.this is such a refreshing breath of sensuous poetry.
Ladybug
January 30, 2005
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superb
so when you put another gold on the ole' page what will that make for you? 20 gold, 30 silver and 5 bronze? hey not fair dude, I still sit on my 2 gold and 4 silver....

this poem is so sensually soft like the feather's of a hummingbird resting on the rose absorbing the nectar for the treat and flight of romance...
can you get any sweeter
~~~~~~sigh~~~~~~
if someone could love me just this much
oh Lordy would I be a girl in heaven then

as always my friend you amaze me with your talent and
beautiful metaphors....
;f
blueangel4u
January 30, 2005
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Excellent!
I absolutely love this, great job my Cuz, keep on keeping on, your poetry always rocks, thanks for sharing with me and helping me too!

blueangel4u
poeticpieces
January 30, 2005
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Lovely!
A very powerful piece of your love you never hide my sweet Dad, this is dreamy, I like it, and wishing for love, sounds fair, being that all you do is give it! I love you Dad, and thanks for penning such beautiful poetry for me to read, and I'm sure everyone else enjoys it too!

Your son, lil Tim
ceegeeess
January 30, 2005
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excellent
"I wish to dream, of love anew
Capturing the you inside of me" very beautiful expression , dear brother Timothy!
nekomordalo
January 30, 2005
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seriously romantic....i like it....kitty
SEA angel
January 30, 2005
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Excellent
This is a lovely poem that can stand on its own merit without any need for a fancy picture or background... Yet this purple speaks of royalty and princes and princesses and a simple abundance of elegance.
iamfromabove
January 30, 2005
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So nice to see guys writing like this. Great work
DeathOfAnArchAngel
January 30, 2005
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Beautiful poem, i know how it is with love. I am in love with a perso who i can no stay away from nd i love himso much. i think this poem is beautiful i am going to have to have him come to read this poem it is great.
*~*DeathOfAnArchAngel*~* Looking for my WeepinArchAngel
trumpet girl
January 30, 2005
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Wow, you seem like such a sensitive guy for writing this, and just so you know, this is basically everything a girl loves to hear. It's such a moving poem and just makes me want someone to love more, excellant job. One of the better poems I've read on here.
Gogetalife
January 30, 2005
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Beautifull write..good choice of words..good luck in the contest
TrulyLoothy
January 30, 2005
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not bad..although it seemed a bit too simply put for my taste..I dunno..oh well good write. p.s. don't take it too hard I'm just really picky ~Rush the lord of poetry